Talon-the-Awesome

Chocolate Factory walked through the large wooden door tail first, Blizzard following shortly behind with Pinkie Pie bouncing along next to her, and Twilight Sparkle hesitantly bringing up the rear.  The room that they entered was pitch black, the only light coming from the door they just passed through.  Said door slowly drifted shut, the light coming through disappearing. Twilight lit up her horn, forming a ball of light at the tip of her horn and casting a magenta glow on the three ponies standing next to her.  She turned to glare at Chocolate.  "And why, may I ask, are there no lights in here?" Chocolate smiled through the glare.  "Oh,

As the world faded back into color, Chocolate Factory was explaining to Rainbow Dash the intricacies of the trans-Factory transport system.  "-and it lets me travel across the Factory incredibly quickly." "Ya know, I bet that I could beat you back to the front of the Factory with me flying and you taking your fancy transportation."  Rainbow fluttered her wings in anticipation. Chocolate grinned.  "Are you sure that you remember the route back?" Rainbow scoffed.  "Of course I do!  What do you think I am?" Chocolate chuckled.  "Maybe an airheaded pegasus?" The cyan pegasus growled, hovering a little higher than she was a second ago.  "I am

There was a thump as the simple door slammed against the wall, and Chocolate Factory trotted through the opening into a good-sized plain white room.  Blizzard followed hard on his hooves.  "What, no flash?" Chocolate turned to look at Blizzard as she stepped up next to him.  "Well, I thought that they might like a break from that." Twilight led the remaining tourists through the doorway.  "Thank Celestia for that."  The rest of the group murmured affirmations.  "So, what's next?" Chocolate looked around the room.  "This..."  He paused dramatically.  "...is a good-sized plain white room!" "Hey!"  Pinkie jumped up and landed in front of Cho

Chocolate Factory walked through the door and into the glaring light.  Blizzard let out a groan.  "How do you keep doing this, Cocoa?"  She followed Chocolate through the door, pulling up along him. The six tourists stumbled through the open doorway.  Chocolate turned his head towards them, chuckling.  "Well, I might have set an enchantment on that door to cause a flash from the inside when it's opened." Twilight shook her head, eyes closed.  "Well, it works."  The rest of the group murmured what vaguely resembled agreement, mingled with frustration. Chocolate smiled.  "Great!  Now that that matter is handled, we can continue with the tour

Chocolate Factory walked through the door and into the glaring light.  Blizzard let out a groan.  "Cocoa, why do you keep the lights so bright in here?" The six ponies and dragon separating them slowly became accustomed to the bright light.  They stumbled in after the leading unicorn.  He looked back over his shoulder, not phased in the slightest.  "Because it adds to the ambiance of the entrance." "And he tells me to be less dramatic," Blizzard said, rolling her eyes. Of the tourists, Pinkie's eyes adjusted the quickest.  "Wooooooooah!"  The rest of the group quickly followed suit, letting out similar sounds of shock and awe. Chocolate,

"Whoa!" the whole group breathed in unison, mouths agape, staring in awe at the giant  chocolate colored building with a large logo on the front of a large CF with a black fedora sitting on top of the C.  There were several monstrous smokestacks on the top of the building belching thick, black smoke. The group had taken the train from Ponyville to Fillydelphia and walked from the station to where the flyer told them the Factory was, somewhere just outside of the Fillydelphia city limits. The group slowly walked up to the giant chocolate-bar-shaped doors with a C etched in one and an F in the other.  Just as they were about to get in knockin

"Come on, Twilight!  Pleeeease?!" "Ugh, why are you so intent on going to see this factory?  You didn't mind not going to see the Weather Factory in Cloudsdale."  Twilight Sparkle pulled her nose out of the book lying on the floor in front of her.  She turned to face Spike.  The young dragon had been pestering her nonstop for two days now. "But the Weather Factory didn't have free chocolate," Spike said. Twilight shook her head, sighing.  "Did the flyer say they were giving away free chocolate?" "…no… but it's a Chocolate Factory!" Spike exclaimed.  "They have to have free samples." "Spike, I've told you before," Twilight said.  "I don't